Talk:South Africa at the 2002 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:43, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Going to take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 20:43, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Background

 * "a total of 2,399 athletes took part representing 77 National Olympic Committees." - a total of 2,399 representing 77 National Olympic Committees took part.
 * "The South African delegation to Salt Lake consisted" - Salt Lake City

Alpine skiing

 * "which put him in 51st place out of 53 competitors who finished the race." - contest
 * "with the total time of all three legs determining final placement." - determining the final positions.
 * "He was faster on his second run," - Heath
 * " the gold medal was won by Stephan Eberharter of Austria" - try Austria's Stephan Eberharter for some variety
 * "His total time for the event was 1 minute and 56.93 seconds,, which put him in 27th place out of 33 classified finishers;" - how about rewording the text in bold to placed him 27th; for the same reason as above

Neat work overall. Found nothing major in my read-through. MWright96 (talk) 08:08, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks,, I've fixed everything above. Courcelles (talk) 16:03, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay. Now promoting this article to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 14 August 2018 (UTC)