Talk:South Carolina v. Catawba Indian Tribe, Inc./GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 19:40, 26 February 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria Thank you for nominating this article. Here are my notes from my first reading through it:


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * "$50M.[1]"->"$50,000,000.[1]"
 * "passed in August 1993 right after President Bill Clinton's omnibus budget legislation." - what does this mean? What is the causal connection? Was the $50 million in the budget?
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * "Since 1763, the tract had become Rock Hill, South Carolina." - need ref.
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Do we have any measure of the impact? How did SC pay for their share?
 * Was the $50 million divided among the remaining living members of the tribe? How did it compare to the amount requested?
 * How much was awarded as attorney fees?
 * B. Focused:
 * I will wait for a second reading before evaluating this criteria.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

I think you will find that my recent edits have resolved your comments. In several places, you requested additional information. I am unable to answer these questions from the available, published sources. In several cases, I have a strong guess, but have chosen to resist the temptation for original research. There is quite a dearth of published information about this case, and I take it as a compliment that what I have done so far as raised your expectations to that level. As per the final Christy quote, I agree that Christy has an opinion, but it has been quoted and attributed as such. Being as he has written the most comprehensive published article on this case, I think the reader is entitled to have a small taste of his opinion. Savidan 02:12, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * If you insist, keep the Christy quote. I do not intend to tempt you into original research. Again, you chose to define "the termination act" but then go ahead and use "the Act". Please define one term or acronym, and then use it consistently to refer to the statute. Please fix the disamb. links to Omnibus and Tacking, by adding pipes to your use of those links in this article. You imply a causal link between the appropriations bill and the approval of the settlement, and you also use President Clinton's name. Why? Thanks, Racepacket (talk) 17:53, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I have fixed the remaining reference to "the Act" and the dab links. As for the appropriations bill, I imply only a chronological link.  The omnibus bill passed, then the termination act was passed next.  It is well-known that budget bills are in large part prepared by the White House, and are thus traditionally associated with the sitting president.  The version as it currently stands is supported by the source.  I do not imply a causal link (although I think I could extrapolate one'; again, original research).  Savidan 18:10, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Can we say after the repeal of the termination act, "This left the Catawba tribe in tact to receive the settlement payment." I think we need to say who got the money. The Wikipedia article indicates that the tribe still exists and obtains casino and bingo revenue. See If we can resolve this issue, we are done. Thanks, Racepacket (talk) 19:09, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I have added the article for the fact that the tribe approved the settlement. You appear to have assumed that the termination act somehow "dissolved" the tribe, which is not the case.  As you can see from the party name, they remained a non-profit corporation.  Nor does the article you cite say anything like that.  Savidan 19:25, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Both the 1959 Act as well as the settlement affected the tribe's sovereignty. As I understand it, many tribes shifted from a collective form of tribal ownership to individual ownership, although the tribe continued in a corporate sense. We are done. Congratulations on another good article. Racepacket (talk) 19:45, 1 March 2011 (UTC)