Talk:South Sudan at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 07:45, 30 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review! I'm surprised that so many references died in the span of a month, but I'll hunt down replacements and try to get all of these addressed by the end of the day, though New Years might interfere. Canadian   Paul  15:42, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Okay, I think that I have addressed all of these except 3b and 4. For 3b, I searched for an explanation when I originally worked on the article and couldn't find one. I looked around even more this time and couldn't find one again, so unfortunately that one will probably have to be left as is. As for 4, I don't see a problem with balance: an accusation was made, Samsung denied it, and the Court of Arbitration for Sport rejected his appeal, which suggests that there was not sufficient merit to/evidence of the accusation for it to be true. I could copy the official statement from Samsung (it's in the article) if you think it would help balance, but I'm not sure if that would run afoul of WP:FAIRUSE. Thoughts? Canadian   Paul  19:24, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing those things. I think the article is good as is. Passing now. Kees08 (talk) 03:45, 4 January 2017 (UTC)