Talk:Sovereignty (play)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tatavivas20, Lisabelle.panossian. Peer reviewers: Alanastein, Yangjulie.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:44, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Lisabelle's Peer Review
The rough draft of Sovereignty retains an unbiased tone throughout the article. Spellcheck on the word "grandfather's" in the third line of the intro. To address the question of the cast, I think it would be fine to add a section of the original cast. Major themes could potentially lead to personal opinion so the criticism and interpretation from valid sources would help balance that.

Aaron's Peer Review
The draft has all the elements needed in terms of history and a unbiased perspective as Lisabelle said, but it can use some some minor fixes to its structure. Specifically, add more links to unique key words (one example is "Cherokee Nation" in the article) and make sure to site information after each subsection even if it is the same article. Also, I could not tell for sure, but if there is a direct quote from an article, make sure to cite it. As you add, just make sure to get information from as many sources as possible and sustain the unbiased tone. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaronstr (talk • contribs) 05:12, 27 April 2018 (UTC)