Talk:Soviet cruiser Admiral Isachenkov/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC) ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ Both anti-ship and anti-submarine - I have clarified in the text. and the two Volga "the"? two of each type? ✅ Ambiguity removed ✅ Although satellite communication and navigation are conventionally not hyphenated so I have left these stet. ✅ Should be radome ✅ ✅ I don't know, so I have changed that. ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅
 * No DABs, external links working
 * Images properly licensed
 * When was the sale to Indian scrappers?
 * I don't know, except that it was after 23 September 1992.
 * Explain what L/80 means
 * I believe it was the calibre but that is not made clear in the literature.
 * What purpose does the MG-35 sonar have?
 * That is not made clear in the reference - maybe it was navigational?
 * In the infobox, add the type of radars to their names
 * As a Kresta II-class cruiser, Admiral Isachenkov
 * Be consistent about using a colon after NATO reporting name
 * Link steam turbine, surface-to-air missile, Captain 2nd rank, sister ship, Libya
 * Spell out DP on first use in the main body and link
 * What do you mean by dual-role torpedoes?
 * a hyphen on "hull mounted", "fire control", "direction finding", satellite navigation, satellite communication and "radar jamming"
 * Sonars don't go in a radardome
 * serial number 727 yard number
 * for Soviet deputy "the" and what was his full title? Deputy commissar?
 * Explain that Kiev was an aircraft carrier before giving her name. Always explain what type a ship is when introducing it
 * the Soviet vessels, such as HMS Ardent, Move the British ship name in front of "the Soviet vessels
 * undertaking repairs and being upgraded with URPK-5 Rastrub (SS-N-14B) which added anti-ship capability. Put in past tense and rephrase
 * On the return to service, awkward
 * rather than having great expense spent on upgrades and repairs, on 3 July 1992 was decommissioned Rephrase and put in past tense
 * Indian company to the broken up "be"
 * Is there an ISSN, OCLC, or ISBN for Berezhnoy? and put the translated title in title case --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:20, 30 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for a very thorough review. simongraham (talk) 19:29, 1 December 2020 (UTC)


 * A few small things remain.
 * Hyphenate dual purpose gun
 * Translated titles use title case
 * The navy cost of upgrades
 * Politician should be replaced with "official" as most admirals aren't officially politicians--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Great spots! These are now done. simongraham (talk) 08:08, 10 December 2020 (UTC)