Talk:Soviet cruiser Admiral Makarov (1970)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 16:43, 26 May 2018 (UTC)

will start in the next coule of days. auntieruth (talk) 16:43, 26 May 2018 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * lead is confusing. She was decommissioned because she was deteriorating, and the navy didn't have funding to repair her, right?  That sentence needs clarity.
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)


 * explain why class is different Nato to soviet
 * Done by linking to NATO reporting name. Kges1901 (talk) 20:39, 1 June 2018 (UTC)


 * paragraph on aerial threat. Admiral Makarov was armed with four AK-725 57 mm L/80 DP guns situated in two twin mountings  Admiral Makarov was armed with four AK-725 57 mm L/80 DP guns situated in two twin mountings to protect against aerial threats.
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)


 * . An engine room fire sparked by a lighted cigarette thrown into a ventilation shaft by a sailor was extinguished in three hours by emergency parties on 20 February 1988. how about On 20 February 1988, a sailor tossed a lighted cigarette into a ventilation shaft, causing an engine fire; emergency parties extinguished the fire in three hours, but the engine room....
 * Done, unfortunately the source did not specify how much damage. Kges1901 (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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