Talk:Soviet destroyer Gnevny (1936)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CaptainEek (talk · contribs) 23:11, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

Things to fix:
 * 3A/1B: Lead mentions that after hitting the mine her survivors were taken on by sister ships, but the "service" section doesn't really mention it, saying only "after being abandoned". If possible, discuss which ships took on survivors or at least mention that survivors were taken on in the "service" section Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 23:53, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The accompanying ships were Maxim Gorky and her sisters Gordy and Steregushchy as mentioned earlier.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:23, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Have made this more detailed. Kges1901 (talk) 19:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Nice work, thanks. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 20:41, 19 December 2018 (UTC)


 * On 1A: Clear & Concise: The first paragraph in the "Design & description" section feels like its the second half of a clause, i.e. some context is missing. "Having decided on"? Decided on after what? What was decided on for the Leningrad class destroyers? Without context it lacks clarity. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 00:23, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * See how it reads now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:23, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Better for sure Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 20:41, 19 December 2018 (UTC)


 * On 1A: In P1 of "D&D" it says "Overloaded"? Does that mean too top heavy? Too much weight? Does the source even specify? Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 00:23, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Attempted to address the last comment. There are no public domain pictures available. Kges1901 (talk) 16:51, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Good, taken care of. And as I suspected, so be it. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 20:41, 19 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Only issue left to solve: cleanup the "which" inline template Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 20:41, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm pretty sure that the source is not detailed enough to state which destroyers did not meet the design speed. Kges1901 (talk) 23:48, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * It only give speed and range data for 8-10 of the ships.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:27, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * So then is there actually enough info for us to make the claim that some ships didn't perform as well? Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 03:14, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's why it's written that way. That whole paragraph will be used for those ships for which no detailed data is available.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:37, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Alright, thats fair. In that case...see below! Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n! 04:42, 20 December 2018 (UTC)

Congrats folks! This article has passed GA! I will be updating the talkpage shortly to reflect that. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n! 04:42, 20 December 2018 (UTC)