Talk:Soviet frigate Rezvyy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:42, 26 February 2022 (UTC)

I will do this one.

Lead
 * ...the vessel was designed to operate as an anti-submarine vessel in the Soviet Navy...: vessel is used twice in this sentence, suggest something like "the vessel was designed to operate in an anti-submarine role for the Soviet Navy"
 * Good point. Amended.
 * with an armament: drop the "an", armament is used in plural form here.
 * Fixed.
 * After a major repair: repair implies an accident but there is nothing to this effect in the body of the article. Perhaps it an overhaul/refit?
 * It looks like a refit.

Design and Development
 * Probably isn't one, but may as well check: no link for "N. P. Sobolov"?
 * Not yet. That would be an interesting article to research.
 * link "dual-role URPK-5": this should be linked here as it is the first mention (it is linked later)
 * Moved wikilink.

Construction and career
 * Laid down by on 10 December 1973: looks like a missing word or words here "laid down by NAME?"
 * Oops.
 * Rezvyy, along with many of the class,: suggest "Rezvyy, along with many of the other ships of her class,"
 * Good suggestion. Reworded.
 * On this trip, Rezvyy, along with the Project 1134A (NATO reporting name 'Kresta II'-class): the Project 1134A/reporting name has already been mentioned in the design and development so it seems repetitive to recite both again.
 * Removed.
 * Rezvyy was sent to Shipyard No. 35 in Murmansk to be repaired.: as noted above, this seems to imply an accident of some kind so ideally should be explained. However, I wonder if it was actually a refit?
 * Looking at the source, it is likely a refit. I have clarified this in the text.
 * meant that the Soviet Navy was no more.: seems a little colloquial/informal for an encyclopedia, suggest "meant that the Soviet Navy ceased to exist.
 * Happy with the suggestion.
 * Rezvyy was transferred to the Russian Navy.: suggest "Rezvyy entered service with the Russian Navy."
 * And again.
 * Tromsø in the NATO member Norway.: suggest "Tromsø in Norway, a member country of NATO."
 * And again.
 * In general, the career information is a little light but if that is all there is...
 * Yes. The crew seems to have had a remarkably drama-free life.

Bibliography
 * The translated title for Apalkov should be title case like the other titles listed.
 * Done.
 * For Friedman, just checking "Russian Federation and Successor States 1991–" is the accurate title, the end year isn't missing from the date range?
 * Yes. That is the title.
 * Polmar is listed but not cited
 * I have re-added.

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 09:42, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
 * , just checking you have seen the above comments? Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:17, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the nudge! Please see my edits and comments above. simongraham (talk) 13:30, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
 * This looks good, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 07:27, 7 March 2022 (UTC)