Talk:Speakers' Corner, Singapore/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 12:40, 14 April 2012 (UTC)

I'll give reviewing this a shot, should have it up soon. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 12:40, 14 April 2012 (UTC)

Almost forgot about this, here are the issues I found:
 * National Solidarity Party links to a disambiguation page; have it link to the right article.
 * by Kaypoh. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "of the Constitution of the Republic of Singapore[2]" period after Singapore
 * by Kaypoh. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "(Registration with the police is no longer required.)" This is already noted in the lead and feels out of plate so early in the article. Move it to a later mention (it's in the next section anyway), or just remove the sentence since the parentheses bring the flow to a halt.
 * by Kaypoh. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "On the same day, the Public Order (Unrestricted Area) Order 2009 " So is it called the Public Order Order? That's a bit confusing, and the addition of various ways to say the bills actually makes it harder to follow; try simplifying them a bit if you can.
 * Comment: Yes, that's the name of the legislation. It is a piece of subsidiary legislation made under the Public Order Act, so that's why it begins with "Public Order ...". Furthermore, it is a species of subsidiary legislation called an "order", so that's why it ends with "Order" as well. In the interest of accuracy, I don't think there is a simpler way to refer to it. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * There's a citation needed tag that needs to be remedied.
 * removed the sentence, as I don't think a citation can be found for it. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "However, several unofficial sites have sprung up to fill this void." examples/citation?
 * by Kaypoh (the sentence has been removed). — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)

There's not too much to fix. I'll put the article on hold for five days and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:28, 19 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Kaypoh fixed most of the issues before I had a look at it a while ago. Anyway, it looks like all the issues have been dealt with. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 23:37, 22 April 2012 (UTC)