Talk:Spencer Heath (baseball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr." - problem relating to MOS:JR here
 * Heath's nationality will need to be mentioned in the first paragraph of the lead
 * "Listed at 6'0", 170 lb.," - the convert template will be better off used on these figures
 * Think the lead can be expanded with further details of Heath's playing career

Early life

 * "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr.," - MOS:JR problem here
 * "Spencer Heath, Sr.," - same as above
 * "Well-known around Chicago for his skills in semipro baseball," - semi-professional

Winnipeg Maroons (1919)

 * Winning percentage would be better off wikilinked to the appropriate article for non-baseball readers

Chicago White Sox (1920)

 * "Baseball historian Frank Russo points out that this was difficult," - the text in bold is informal; a word such as noted is more appropriate in this instance
 * The term inning can be wikilinked to its article only on the first mention

Later years

 * "Heath returned to playing semipro ball after his time with the White Sox." - semi-professional baseball
 * Semipro ball is a common term in the baseball world; I never see it spelled out. I linked it to an appropriate article in case people wonder what it means. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 01:37, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Will put the review on hold to enable the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 21:14, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 06:57, 3 July 2021 (UTC)