Talk:Spitfire (EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nkon21 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

I love Porter Robinson! I will review this within the week right now. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯  talk  04:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * After releasing 2010 hit → After released his 2010 single
 * I'd like to emphasize that "Say My Name" was a hit
 * Robinson wanted to try different styles of music by developing an EP, moving away from his eurodance style. → Robinson expressed desire to explore various musical genres by producing an EP, diverging from his traditional eurodance style.
 * Done; used "different" instead of "various"
 * Spanning multiple genres, Spitfire was the first release on Owsla and crashed Beatport after musicians Skrillex and Tiësto publicized it → Spanning a range of genres, Spitfire marked the inaugural release on Owsla and caused Beatport to crash following its promotion by musicians Skrillex and Tiësto.
 * Done
 * It charted → Spitfire charted
 * Done
 * and Robinson later toured in support of it → with Robinson subsequently embarking on a tour to promote it.
 * Done
 * Robinson said he always wanted to do an → Robinson expressed desire to produce an
 * Done
 * as that allowed for different styles of music that his fans could not be fond of → as it provided an opportunity to experiment with different musical styles that might not necessarily appeal to his fans.
 * Done; used "could" instead of "might"
 * and these became his → who became his
 * Done
 * to his older releases → to his previous works
 * Done
 * Kerri Mason wrote to Kerri Mason wrote for
 * Done (still need to figure out the difference between "to" and "for"...)
 * After getting Skrillex's attention with "Say My Name" → After capturing Skrillex's interest with "Say My Name"
 * Done
 * Can you find a better source other than Soundcloud on ref 10?
 * I couldn't find any reliable sources talking about the release of Bonus Remixes, so it has to be a primary source.
 * libertarian websites such as The Daily Paul, Lew Rockwell's blog and Reason wrote about "The State", which contains excerpts from For a New Liberty by Murray N. Rothbard, as narrated by Jeff Riggenbach. → libertarian websites including The Daily Paul, Lew Rockwell's blog, and Reason expressed interest towards "The State", highlighting its incorporation of excerpts from For a New Liberty by Murray N. Rothbard, as voiced by Jeff Riggenbach.
 * Done
 * Who named him "the libertarian dubstep guy"?
 * Done (attributed)
 * John Ochoa wrote to → John Ochoa penned to
 * Changed structure / used another word
 * on Robinson's discography → in Robinson's discography
 * Done (I still confuse "in" and "on" a lot...)
 * Add a headline parameter for the track list template
 * Sources should be archived (bot)
 * Done

That's all I have! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯  talk  06:54, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
 * thank you! All responded. Skyshifter   talk  12:34, 19 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Passing now, as my comments have been addressed. ɴᴋᴏɴ21  ❯❯❯  talk  16:22, 19 March 2024 (UTC)