Talk:Spoon Jackson

Why does this article talk about Jackson being a prisoner before it ever mentions him being a writer? This would seem to indicate that prisoner status supersedes all other life factors, which is not true. Other people in the arts are named as writer, director, conceptual artist, etc. in the opening sentence of their articles. This article should do the same. 98.210.157.158 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 13:36, 1 July 2013 (UTC)