Talk:Spotlight (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tb hotch Ta lk C.  05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

I've reviewd the article, in general all is fine except something:

Lead

 * The song was used in a Mitsubishi VCR commercial, featuring Madonna. -> maybe where she appeared?
 * Done.

Critical Review

 * Chicago Tribune -> Wikilink
 * It has been wikilinked in the line before. Again linking it will cause WP:OVERLINK.

Chart performance

 * "...stations started to play the song unofficially and it managed to garner enough airplay to appear..." -> source?
 * Added from Feldman.

Media appearance

 * "The commercial featured..." -> In the commercial featured...
 * Rephrased.

Credits and personnel

 * Source?
 * Added.

Final comments
Some comments, not much work to do, so the article is in hold on for a week. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
 * OK. So anything else? --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 06:27, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
 * The ISBN (above). Tb hotch Ta lk C.  06:29, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
 * All done. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 06:33, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
 * So, congratulation the article pass its nomination. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  06:37, 9 June 2010 (UTC)