Talk:Squatting in Albania/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 01:22, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Comment Good to see you once again Mujinga! I will be reviewing this later tonight.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 01:22, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * This was very fascinating! Great to see some more work on squatting-related articles from you :) I will put the article on hold for now but this should not take long; it is fairly short, but sweet! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns fully so that I can know when to respond. If you wish to respectfully disagree with any of my points please do so—I reckon we can work it out.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 01:55, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi LunaEatsTuna thanks for picking this one up! Mujinga (talk) 13:21, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * cheers for the helpful suggestions, I hope I have answered everything to your satisfaction Mujinga (talk) 15:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Great! I am happy to pass this for GA status now. Thanks for the fast response and congrats!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 19:16, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Copyvio check
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Text

 * "Bathore near to Tirana had 40,000 squatters by the early 2000s." → "The area of Bathore, just outside Tirana, had 40,000 squatters by the early 2000s." Flows better in my opinion.
 * I'll come back to that one, always like to do the lead last Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * rejigged and expanded lead slightly Mujinga (talk) 14:53, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "immediately outlawed private title to land on coming to power". As a reader unfamiliar with property jargon, this confused me at first. Is it possible to rephrase it a little bit or wiki link it to something?
 * Good point, rephrased and added link to land title Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "Catholic organisations have bought up land specifically to house Catholic squatters." This sentence is in present-tense while the previous and succeeding sentences are both in past-tense. Are Catholic organisations presently buying land for this reason? If so, this sentence feels slightly out of place.
 * I see what you mean, rejigged Mujinga (talk) 13:29, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "the government then pledged to meet all ten demands of the squatters except the one requesting a hospital." Maybe mention in a previous sentence what some of these ten demands were if possible?
 * rejigged and mentioned amenities - the ten demands aren't all listed but it's about things like a legal connection to electricity, water and sanitation Mujinga (talk) 14:20, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "The Agency of Legalization, Upgrading, and Integration of Informal Zones and Buildings (ALUIZNI) was founded" when?
 * 2006, added Mujinga (talk) 14:13, 25 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "country-wide" how about "nationwide"?
 * sure! Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)