Talk:Sri Lanka and the World Bank

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Comments
In the second sentence under "Associations with the Bank" there needs to be a "," after "Currently" J.c.ucsd (talk) 02:52, 7 June 2017 (UTC)J.c.ucsd

Make sure that you're not using "it" too much when you are talking about the IBRD involvement in Sri Lanka J.c.ucsd (talk) 02:52, 7 June 2017 (UTC)J.c.ucsd

There can be a more constructive ending to the "Associations with the Bank" because the last sentence is kind of abrupt and off topic from the sub topic section J.c.ucsd (talk) 02:52, 7 June 2017 (UTC)J.c.ucsd

In the second sentence under "Current Strategy" there needs to be a "," after "Currently" J.c.ucsd (talk) 02:52, 7 June 2017 (UTC)J.c.ucsd

In "Recent Projects" the beginning sentences sound like a persuasive article you might want to change the wording in order to make it sound more informative J.c.ucsd (talk) 02:52, 7 June 2017 (UTC)J.c.ucsd

I think the page is well organized and the explanation is based on reliable sources with neutral contexts connected with each sub-topics. This gives me more sense how to edit mine now. the citations links are all working well. I do not find any plagiarism since the most of the sources are cited from the World Bank website. Nothing to add at this moment. it looks good to meJinhyuk Lee (talk) 06:49, 10 June 2017 (UTC)Jinhyuk Lee

Addition Of Citation
Hello Wikipedians,

Citation needs to get added in the Recent projects section in the second paragraph last sentence beside the word " fiscal consolidation". Here is the citation link to get added as citation in the sentence "Parliament passed a new Inland Revenue Law in September 2017, which marks a key milestone towards sustainable revenue-led fiscal consolidation."

Link : https://elibrary.worldbank.org/doi/abs/10.1596/28826

Please take out some time to check and consider my suggestion related to addition of citation. Prudent CAS (talk) 12:27, 4 January 2024 (UTC)