Talk:Srimanthudu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:24, 29 November 2015 (UTC)

I'll finish this one shortly JAG  UAR   14:24, 29 November 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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Initial comments

 * "and played the film's protagonist" - I feel that the protagonist's name should be mentioned here
 * "and encouraged the adoption of village in Telangana and Andhra Pradesh" - should this either be a village or villages?
 * "Harsha Vardhan is the sole heir of his father Ravikanth's business empire worth 250 billion" - no rupee symbol here?
 * "A possible delay was expected as Mahesh had earlier agreed to work in a film" - on a film
 * "All lyrics written by Ramajogayya Sastry, except where noted." - this sentence is unsourced
 * " called a feat that India's then prime minister Narendra Modi‍‍ '​‍s" - isn't he the current prime minister?

Close - promoted
I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, so I can conclude that this article outright meets the GA criteria. Well done! I think this is your best one yet. It is comprehensive, well written and the references are also fine. I enjoyed reading this one  JAG  UAR   15:58, 29 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review ! I've resolved all those comments you have listed. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:18, 29 November 2015 (UTC)