Talk:Srizbi botnet/GA1

GA Review
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For various MOS and prose issues, I am quick failing this article. Examples are seen below:

-First sentence is a run-on sentence
 * world's (with an apostrophe)

-Lead is too short. Needs to have more than one paragraph -Citations go behind' the period. No spaces after cites either. -botnet doesn't have to be re-linked again if it was mentioned before. -Couple of prose issues:
 * The "Srizibi Botnet" botnet?
 * "As of 13 juli 2008" Spanish needs to be converted into English and linked
 * trojan needs to be linked
 * dates need to be linked
 * There is a misformed ref. in "Spread and Botnet Composition"

-Russia needs to be capitalized
 * don't capitalize bot
 * In English Wikipedia, we use commas for numbers, such as "10,000". Spanish and other FL wikipedias don't.
 * "Trough"?
 * "A spokesman told the press"
 * Which press? newspaper?
 * ''The highly publicizes"?

 miranda   02:03, 21 July 2008 (UTC)