Talk:Stéphane Sparagna/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * no dab links
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * no dab links
 * no dab links
 * no dab links

Lead

 * Delink France in the prose and infobox per WP:OVERLINK
 * "on loan Marseille," - missing "to"

Marseille

 * The wikilink on the word "friendly" should be to Exhibition match

2016-17 season: Loan to Auxerre

 * "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
 * "playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.

Summary of Fixes
Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.


 * France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
 * "on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
 * the wikilink Exhibition match is now used for the word "friendly"
 * "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
 * A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star
 * Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)