Talk:St. Joseph's Church, Semarang/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 19:58, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Will review within the next three days.♦ Dr. Blofeld  19:58, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks Dr. B. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:52, 28 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * ."As the Catholic population grew, the size of the Gedangan parish diminished as new ones were established." No previous mention of Gedangan. I gather that is the ecclesiastical parish? You might want to mention something about it being within it.
 * Fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * A new church
 * "The tower was also given a clock and bells during this period; the clock was removed in 1978 since the machinery was broken. Lijden died in 1882, and the Jesuit Joannes de Vries became the parish priest; all of St. Joseph's head pastors since have been Jesuits.[" The two semi colons repeat a bit on me here, can you find a way to avoid this?
 * Nixed one. That should be enough. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "using bricks imported from the Netherlands " -you might link bricks to Dutch brick.♦ Dr. Blofeld  08:33, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Didn't know we had an article . Linked — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * " A multi-story presbytery was begun" -can you reword begun? I never like "was begun".
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Add a space between 1 and August.
 * Que? There's a space there. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Must be the font I'm using!♦ Dr. Blofeld  09:39, 29 June 2014 (UTC)


 * "Also installed that year were carvings depicting the fourteen Stations of the Cross" -do we know the artist?
 * Will check. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * No, don't see it anywhere. They're not discussed all that much. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:57, 29 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Growth
 * Three Jesuits were sent, - I think there should probably be a dash here rather than a comma.
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)


 * I'd rather you stated the church rather than "Another church".♦ Dr. Blofeld  08:48, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "A third church", to be clear that this is yet another. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)

Nice article, interesting insight into Catholic history in Indonesia in context too.♦ Dr. Blofeld  08:53, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:03, 29 June 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Good job!♦ Dr. Blofeld  10:50, 29 June 2014 (UTC)