Talk:St. Lawrence High School, Kolkata

speedy delete
This article is a complete mess. Much of it is a personal essay and it is peppered with poor grammar, excessive use of capitals, and other problems. However, this is an actual school (100,000+ g-hits) and probably deserves a page. I did not create this page, but I think this thing should be re-written rather than deleted. I have hacked out some of the worst bits and will try to get more done. Matt Deres (talk) 19:00, 10 April 2009 (UTC)
 * CSD nomination withdrawn. Hadn't noticed yet that you were trying to salvage the article. - Triona (talk) 19:03, 10 April 2009 (UTC)


 * You two have much improved it - my earlier efforts were more tentative, but you give a vivid example of interventional editing to learn from. Thanks! Alice (talk) 20:10, 11 April 2009 (UTC)