Talk:St. Xavier's College, Mumbai/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 18:29, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this page against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Overview

 * The article is not very well written. There are errors of grammar and clumsy phrasing throughout. It would benefit from a thorough copy-edit, maybe with the assistance of the WP:Guild of copyeditors. Until that has happened, I won't go through it in detail.
 * The article appears thoroughly referenced, but there is an over reliance on primary sources.
 * The Academics section is rather too detailed, verging on promotional.
 * Information in many sections is rather unstructured, large numbers of sentences start with the phrase the college...'
 * The location map of the college should be added to the infobox.
 * I am putting this on hold for seven days for the copy-editing to be addressed. When that has happened, I will look at it in detail. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:52, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

I have received the following note from the nominator on my talk page:

GA nomination of St. Xavier's College, Mumbai
It's impossible to copyedit the article in a week. Please fail the article. Xavier449 (talk) 03:34, 18 December 2009 (UTC)

Consequently, I shall fail this article at the present time. Please bring back to WP:GAN when you feel the issues above have been addressed. Or ask me to take a look when you thisnk that it is ready. Jezhotwells (talk) 11:28, 18 December 2009 (UTC)