Talk:St George's Church, Trotton

Pre-GAN comments
I note this article is awaiting review as a GAN, so while waiting for a reviewer, may I make some suggestions which may help to make some improvements pre-review.
 * Lead. This should be a summary of the whole article and it should not really contain any material not in the main body of the article.  Which leads me to:
 * Structure. The main importance of the article is the architecture of the church, and this deserves a (major) section of its own.  How about a first section of "History" or "Location and history"? I guess there is more history about this ancient church than is currently in the article.  Then the section on "Architecture" with subsections on "Structure", describing its exterior and building materials, "Fittings and furniture", about the interior and the items of interest, for example the font, then "Wall paintings" and finally "Tombs".  Then a final section about "Present day" or some such subheading, incorporating the information currently in the lead about services, etc.

If some of these were to be acted on, I feel it might save some time at GAN. Also, as the main interest in the article is the architecture and paintings, would it not be better to be placed in the "Art and architecture" section of GAN rather than "Religion" - there's very little religion in the article. Whatever the decisions made, best of luck with your reviewer at GAN. Peter I. Vardy (talk) 22:17, 6 November 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the ideas - I'll give some thought to them. I wasn't really sure where to categorise it on GAN, so I just picked somewhere. It is a problem with the system on GAN - you have to choose on category and often there isn't one that is obviously the best. --Tango (talk) 22:33, 6 November 2009 (UTC)


 * Just to let you know I've managed to get three Cheshire churches to GA level through the Arts and architecture section. Cheers. Peter I. Vardy (talk) 09:54, 7 November 2009 (UTC)