Talk:St Helen and St Katharine

NPOV dispute
86.155.210.9 (talk) 16:57, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Use of "us" (for example "Academic results consistently place "us" amongst the top 20 schools in the country") makes the piece seem self-promotional and therefore biased
 * No citations; as a result, facts cannot be cross-examined and it could be biased
 * Sentences such as "Life beyond the classroom is full " seem more like opinion/advertising than fact - if this were cited as an opinion from a blog, website, book etc. it would be more acceptable and less biased
 * "The school has an excellent academic record" - probably true but not backed up by relevant statistics etc so it seems like opinion and could be biased