Talk:St Mary's Church, Rhodogeidio/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ironholds (talk) 17:42, 17 January 2011 (UTC)


 * "Dating from the 15th century, some restoration work was carried on in the 19th century, but it has since fallen into disuse" - makes it sounds like they gave up on restoration work :P. Try "Dating from the 15th century, some restoration work was carried on in the 19th century, but the building has since fallen into disuse". That actually seems to be my only concern. Ironholds (talk) 17:42, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I reworded it in a slightly different way, just to be awkward! How's it looking now? BencherliteTalk 20:32, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Much better, actually; I was thinking the first clause looked somewhat confusing. 'angon while I pass it. Ironholds (talk) 20:48, 17 January 2011 (UTC)