Talk:Stacy Long/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 15:03, 1 May 2019 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 15:03, 1 May 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

Lead

 * I think its standard for former to come after nationality. His a footballer not a former English footballer if you see what I mean. I would say professional could be included as well, he played at a fully professional level during his career.
 * Link Ebbsfleet United in the first paragraph.
 * He ended his playing career playing for Leatherhead, slight repetition with playing there. "Ended his playing career with Leatherhead" maybe?
 * Long has represented England, as he is now retired should the has be dropped?

Early career

 * made 23 appearances for Notts County during the 2005–06 season as Notts county, bit of repetition with the club name here. Drop the second mention for the club or team or some similar.
 * Substitute is linked in the third paragraph but is used in the previous paragraph. Move the link to the first use.
 * and earned a contract extension for a further year, source for this?
 * including successive braces against Grays Athletic and Weymouth respectively, I might be wrong here but is respectively necessary if successive is already used previously?

Stevenage

 * Charlton repeat linked in the second paragraph.