Talk:Stafy

This could be improved...
Every paragraph starts with "Stafy", and most of them have "is" right after that. Has anyone heard of sentence fluency? It's mostly about the beginnings of adjacent sentences being different parts of speech (noun, verb, etc.), and makes sentences flow for a good read.

This page can be remedied in three ways: --Clorox (talk) 22:16, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Change "Stafy" to a pronoun every so often
 * Change the word order around
 * Add a dependent clause (lead-in) to the beginning
 * A character from a fairly obscure video game series does not need a full article, so I've proposed a merge into Densetsu no Stafy. Parrothead1983 (talk) 20:34, 22 March 2008 (UTC)