Talk:Stan Mataele/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:57, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * He wanted to try out the sport, so he lied and said that he did play, although he said that the first day in practice, the coach "immediately knew I hadn't."
 * What's your suggestion?
 * Haha sorry. Just a suggestion to split the sentence into two. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 14:20, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:13, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
 * What is NorCal?
 * Northern California - changed.
 * NFLPA should be spelled out.
 * Done.
 * Ref spot check: #4, 8, 11, 15, 16, 21
 * BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 17:22, 19 October 2023 (UTC)