Talk:Stand Up for Love/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:35, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article over the weekend.

Infobox

 * Needs "alt".

Lead

 * "American recording group Destiny's Child" → American girl group Destiny's Child
 * "any other major music chart". → remove major

Background and release

 * "poor families" → too informal
 * "She further talked about the song" → She furthered saying
 * "that New Zealand radio stations play "Stand Up for Love"" → "Stand Up for Love" to be played in New Zealand radio stations
 * "that New Zealand radio stations play" → New Zealand radio stations to play
 * asked radio stations → which radio stations? + user some word to replace "radio stations". This section has at least 3 times the two words "radio stations".
 * UK and Canada dates should also be mentioned along with the format.

Recording and composition

 * "along with his daughter Amy Foster-Gillies and Beyoncé" → the latter is not credited, so please remove it.
 * "Vinnie Colaiuta and Paulinho Da Costa played drums and percussion respectively while Nathan East was responsible for the bass". → Nathan East was responsible for playing the bass, while Vinnie Colaiuta and Paulinho Da Costa handled the drums and percussion, respectively.
 * Remove "(4:46)"
 * He didn't "found elements of adult contemporary music" → he said that the song genre is "adult contemporary", quite different.

Reception

 * "Pitchfork Media's" → from the context I don't understand if it's a good o bad review, needs clarification.

Promotion

 * Change section name to "Music video and live performances".
 * "Stand Up for Love" was sung by the band again that day at Ronald McDonald House Charities in Los Angeles for World Children's Day" → On the same day, the single was sung by them at Ronald McDonald House Charities in Los Angeles for World Children's Day.

Cover versions

 * the South Korean" → remove "the"
 * "At the 2014 Miss Thailand World, contestant Maeya performed "Stand Up for Love" in June 2014" → At the 2014 Miss Thailand World, contestant Maeya performed "Stand Up for Love" in June of the same year.

Credits and personnel

 * Use " –" instead of "-" (click to edit to copy it properly)

Track listings

 * Change section name to "Formats and track listing"

Release and radio history

 * Unlike Format(s) and label.

Overall GA review
Marvelous article, I will put in on hold until you fix the issues I raised. "Ping" me when you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:00, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. Everything is ✅. My love is love 18:30, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
 * nice work you just forgot to "unlink" on the "release and radio history". I have also made two changes in the article besides the former I cited. Please see if you are ok with them, if so it will pass to GA. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:43, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Oops, totally forgot that one. Thank you for helping me. My love is love 18:47, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
 * No harm done, gladly passing now. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:50, 18 June 2016 (UTC)