Talk:Standing Up in the Milky Way/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Think I'll review this one.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Here goes:


 * Per WP:RS/IMDB, you should probably replace those cites to it, maybe to something like the episode's credits
 * Two DAB links that need fixing: Enterprise and National Geographic
 * After you've introduced Neil deGrasse Tyson, all following mentions of him should be just "Tyson"
 * I think you should mention the episode's ratings in the reception section
 * "and ready for shipment on June 29, 2014." -> "and is scheduled to be released on June 29, 2014" sounds better
 * You should mention Nicholson's 8.5 grade
 * "Positive review was also given by Slate journalist Phil Plait" Shouldn't there be an "a" before "Positive review"?

Looks ok. I'll put in on hold.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 18:03, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes check.svg Done. Phill24th (talk) 10:38, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * You think you could do anything about the IMDB cites? Otherwise looks good  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 20:01, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah, OK. [[Image:Icon tools.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] Working. Phill24th (talk) 07:19, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed: Will that do? Phill24th (talk) 07:38, 22 April 2014 (UTC)