Talk:Stanley Browne (RNZAF officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:52, 10 March 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:52, 10 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * a wall in the shower block clarify this, I had to read it twice to figure out what you meant
 * Have rephrased a bit, how does it work for you?


 * Any idea which destroyer picked them up?
 * No the source doesn't specify this.


 * No 's' in Rhubarbs
 * Fixed.


 * of the HMS Warspite no 'the' and tell the reader that Warspite was a battleship
 * Fixed and done.


 * Do you know what mark of Spitfire his old unit was flying when her rejoined them?
 * Have added


 * a lack of availability shortage--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:44, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Rephrased as suggested., thanks for taking a look at this. I have dealt with your comments as above and edits to the article. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:59, 14 March 2023 (UTC)