Talk:Stanley Park, Blackpool

Comments
I see I missed peer reviewing, but I will give a few comments here.
 * "under the eye of Thomas Mawson." What does this mean? Why not designed by him?
 * "dedicated to William Cocker" I would leave this out of the lead. It means nothing to the reader without the details below.
 * "Within the Stanley Park grounds stands a 5000 seat cricket ground" "stands" is an odd word here - perhaps "are".
 * "Albert Lindsay Parkinson". I would not put this in red - indicating that he is notable and should have his own article - without explanation.
 * "The land previously consisted of "the most heterogeneous..." A quote should have the name of the author as "According to x..."
 * "for the recreational needs of the modern generation". Comment as above.
 * I find the paragraph on Stowe House confusing.
 * "The lake’s tourist boating previously consisted of rowing boats and canoes though is now popular with motorboats and pedalos." This sounds ungrammatical.
 * "which the council embraced" I would leave out "embraced".
 * "Soon after, the building was deemed structurally unsafe". I would prefer "Soon afterwards"
 * "animals to transverse between sites." I think "to be moved" would be better than traverse.
 * I would have a bit more detail about access - say the names of three or four road names which have entrances.
 * A good article. Dudley Miles (talk) 12:10, 4 January 2015 (UTC)