Talk:StarCraft pirate militias

Title and intro of article
I happened to stumble on this article by clicking on "Random Article". I'm not a gamer and know as good as nothing about video/PC games. There is nothing in the title or first paragraph to show that this is about a game, the term "parallel universe" was a hint for me that this is fiction, but I had to scroll down to the very bottom of the article to find out that this is about a game. I'm wondering if for other users the idea of a "parallel universe" isn't rather absurd if you haven't heard the term in context with fantasy. What I'm saying is that I think the article assumes too much prior knowledge in the reader. I don't think it should be expected that people know that StarCraft is a game or what "parallel universe" means in this context. A clarification in the first paragraph would be helpful, IMO. Monika, 09:13, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I say it's absurd in context. Lessee here... --Kizor 23:43, 11 March 2007 (UTC)