Talk:Star Wars: The Force Unleashed II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 09:38, 11 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "The Nintendo handheld is designed around allowing players to quickly get into or out of the game.[9]" - I am confused about the "about"
 * reworded, see if it's clearer --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * What is "Slave I"?
 * reworded --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Who are Ewoks?
 * linked --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Many links missing in this section (Chewbacca, Han Solo, etc)
 * linked to these characters, but I would need to know specifics as to what else needs wikilinked. --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Ref 68 does not lead to any site
 * There is no site to follow. Nintendo Power is a print-only magazine and I don't have access to the issue. --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * In any event, that particular bit can be seen on Metacritic. I can replace it with an online source, if you want. —DAP388 (talk) 18:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The concern is that it states December as against October 22. Were there multiple reviews of Nintedo Power? It would be nice if you would replace it, DAP.-- GoP T C N 08:44, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Use pp only for several pages
 * fixed --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Inconsistent date style
 * fixed --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: These issues hinder the article's promotion to GA status-- GoP T C N 15:28, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: These issues hinder the article's promotion to GA status-- GoP T C N 15:28, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Pass There is a minor issue regarding the Nintendo Power magazine. But as this is the only concern, I will promote this article. Regards.-- GoP T C N 16:21, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
 * If you want to take this to FAC in future: Prose needs to be simplified a bit for our general users, plot needs to be expanded if possible (I know it is remarked that the story is rather short and boring), the references should be high-quality, as the reviewers there are very nitpicky (for example, try remove the redundant references)-- GoP T C N 16:30, 12 July 2012 (UTC)