Talk:Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:51, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationale for the poster is in great shape!
 * In the infobox, why do the editors, along with the cinematographer need references?
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The theatrical poster doesn't include any "Story by" credits, so that needs references.
 * ✅ added with the BFI Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Screenplay by" should be "Written by" per the theatrical poster credits.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * For writing, J. J. Abrams is credited before Chris Terrio on the poster.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * In the second paragraph, the use of "score" feels repetitive.
 * Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The use of "although" and then "and turned" sounds off, maybe change the latter to "it turned".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "and it turned" "it turned
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:30, 16 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "last time" "last time for the franchise" or something similar
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:30, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * Remove the comma after "nearby".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "on the Falcon".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Plot is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.

Cast

 * "include:" "include"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:57, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Everything thing else looks good.

Production

 * The reference after "May 24, 2019" isn't working.
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * A source is needed for filming being "pushed back to August".
 * ❌ removed Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "The Hollywood Reporter reported" seems repetitive.
 * Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "The next day" - You never mentioned the original date.
 * Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The reference after "to December 20, 2019" isn't working.
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What is the purpose of the note after "complete the story"?
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Marketing

 * In this section, and in the rest of the article, change "Star Wars Celebration" to "the Star Wars Celebration".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "December 18, 2019".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "and was released" "and were released"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "cancelled" "canceled"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The last sentence in the section makes it seem like "the same day" refers to December 14, so try rewording.
 * ❌ per WP:TRAILER Chompy Ace 23:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * Both subsections here look good.

Reception

 * Remove the comma after "$300 million".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "October 21, 2019".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "$205 million" "$200 million" (source used)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "third weekend".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * I would use this reference for the Thursday night previews.
 * ✅ added Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What is the purpose of the following sentence?: "however, Deadline Hollywood did write that "we can't ignore" the less than stellar audience exit scores, which could affect the film's legs moving forward". Also, why is it written in present tense?
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Update Rotten Tomatoes.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "33%" "32%" (source used)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What is the category sorting rule in the award table? Try to make it consistent (importance, alphabetical order, etc.)
 * ✔️ alphabetical order Chompy Ace 23:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)