Talk:Star on the Mountain/GA1

GA review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:10, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Overall, it's almost there. The first section could use a reflow to make the paragraphs less choppy, and there are two minor comma items, one minor reference item (and a suggestion), and alt text on the image. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * holiday season, but - remove comma
 * ✅: Diff. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
 * November 29, 1940 at - MOS:DATECOMMA needed
 * ✅: Diff. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
 * A lot of choppy one- or two-sentence paragraphs in "20th century" header
 * : Combined some of them together, hopefully flows better now. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Other

 * Add page numbers to newspapers.com refs (this requires looking at the page)
 * ✅: Diff. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
 * References are archived.
 * Archived one more that I must've missed. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Since it's been a year and the Herald-Post is now in newspapers.com for the full run, do a search to see if that newspaper has any articles that might be relevant.
 * : Definitely a lot to sift through there, working on it. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
 * @Sammi Brie: Calling this one ✅: I think I've gathered as much as I can from the Herald-Post. . Bsoyka  ( talk ) 17:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Going to pass for GA. It definitely has a bit more heft with the Herald-Post materials. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
 * The lone image is PD, but it does need alt text.
 * ✅: Used A five-pointed star made up of white lights on a mountain during an orange sunset, with a tree silhouette in the foreground. Diff. Bsoyka  ( talk ) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Review in progress