Talk:Starbreeze Studios/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this finished soon. Maybe in a day or two. JAG UAR   21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * The lead is perfect
 * "Starbreeze attempted to acquire another studio, Rock Solid Games, but the agreement between the two fell apart and brought both companies financial problems" - needs citation
 * "Starbreeze again encountered financial difficulties having not received a significant royalty payment from Vivendi" - Starbreeze again encountered financial difficulties after having not received a significant royalty payment from Vivendi?
 * "and helped the company to make a record profit for the first time after suffering an accumulated loss" - de-link profit
 * "According to Starbreeze, the studio is keen to produce intellectual properties" - bit informal
 * "After the 2012 departure of many employees, and the disappointing commercial sales of Syndicate" - already linked before, de-link
 * "in Starbreeze's ability to make games that are more than typical AAA games" - this too needs de-linking, as it's linked before
 * No dead links
 * No dabs

I don't see any real reason to put this on hold, so I think I'll just pass it outright. Well done! Would be good if the citation issue could be addressed. JAG UAR   19:49, 5 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review! I have addressed the issues you raised above. AdrianGamer (talk) 15:51, 6 April 2016 (UTC)