Talk:Staten Island Economic Development Corporation

Need for total overhaul of this page
The main parts of this page (ie the "Projects and Programs" and "Neighborhood development" sections) are in need of a total overhaul. I'm 99% sure (without looking it up) that the majority of this page was lifted from a SIEDC report and is not written from a neutral POV at all. A lot of work is needed (imo) to add in correct sources (ie news articles or other reports) to show how each of the projects developed and whether or not they have been completed yet. I may come back to this page to take a stab at it but it feels like it will take some time to comb through the internet to find good sources.

P.S. - I'm quite new to this editing stuff so I'm not sure if I'm saying this stuff correctly or going about this right. If not, just let me know. That said, I feel like my overall sentiment is accurate. PuffinHater (talk) 21:15, 13 October 2023 (UTC)