Talk:Statue of Harvey W. Scott/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * Can you move the citation in the lead about the statue's location to a new paragraph or sentence in "Description"?
 * I can if required, but actually this source specifically confirms the alternate titles. I've moved the citation mid-way through the sentence to clarify. Does this work for you? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:54, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * That will do. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  01:22, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

Referencing

 * There are connection errors for citations [8], [9], [18], and [38]. [11] apparently also has an error in its URL. See the "External link" tool for details.
 * 8, 9, 18, and 38 all work just fine for me. I wonder if The Oregonian server was down momentarily? Can you access these now? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:55, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I don't see issues with 38 either. I've added archive links. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:59, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * The memorial is installed in Mount Tabor Park, a city park on Mount Tabor, a dormant volcano in southeast Portland's eponymous neighborhood. No citation present.
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:04, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

GA progress
Article passes CopyVio scanner. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Pictures are free/tagged and relevant to the article. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

There are no disambiguation links present on the article. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

References are reliable. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  09:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)