Talk:Steel Gunner/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:37, 8 March 2020 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Players take control of Garcia and Cliff, police officers" - the text in bold should be worded as either two police officers or a duo of police officers
 * "avoid inflicting damage on civilians" - better; harming
 * Wikilink arcade cabinet

Gameplay

 * "The plot the police officers Garcia and Cliff," - a word is missing from this section of text
 * "members of the Neo Arc police force" - more complete; who are members
 * Wikilink health meter to Health (game terminology) and boss fight to Boss (video games) and levels to Level (video games)
 * "The loss of all health results in game over." - in a game over.
 * "If players' shooting accuracy was poor," - more complete and formal; If the players' shooting accuracy was low,

Development and release

 * "described as the company's" - state whom is describing as whom to avoid MOS:WEASEL

Reception

 * You can mention the names of the reviewers opposite the magazines if you feel it would be beneficial to the article
 * "with several complimenting its responsive controls and its well-designed levels." - the second mention of the word "its" should be removed
 * "Some have also drawn comparisons" - some reviewers or some magazines
 * "and the tenth most-successful." - based on the Electronic Games source, the text here would be better off worded as tenth most-successful overall of that month.
 * "and Taito's Operation Wolf (1987).[9][1]" - refs should be in numerical order

Sequel

 * "was released a year later in Japan in March 1992 and in North America in April 1992." - the following month.}