Talk:Steele dossier

Is the legality of the dossier slightly overstated?
In view of the FEC statement from 2022, I'm somewhat worried about the present wording of following paragraph in the section Steele dossier:
 * By contrast, Steele's work was a legal, declared, campaign expense and did not involve any voluntary offer of aid to the Clinton campaign from the Russian government. FEC law allows such declared campaign expenditures, even if the aid is performed by foreigners. 

I do not doubt that the Bump statement from 2018 should be considered as a reliable source, stating the full legality of the dossier, as in the quoted paragraph. I also note that as regards the main point, the question of the legality in employing and contacting non-US citizens for an investigation about possible illegal actions of a political opponent on one hand, vz. receiving aid and/or money from a foreign government in order to facilitate a certain (federal) election result on the other, there seems to be no difference between Bump's opinion 2018 and FEC's finding after more than 3 years of processing. Indeed, as you can see from FEC's letter, there were accusations that the HRC campaign or their agents had violated 52 U.S. Code § 30121; these accusations vere duly investigated by FEC; and they were dismissed.

However, the claim that "Steele's work was a legal, declared, campaign expense" and "FEC law allows such declared campaign expenditures" according to the opinion expressed by FEC "probably" does not mean that declaring this expense as for "legal service" was legal. Neither the HRC campaign and nor DNC accepted that declaring this particular part of the expenses as violations of 52 U.S.C. § 30104(b)(5)(A) and (b)(6)(B)(v) and 11 C.F.R. § 104.3(b)(3)(i); but both agreed to pay the fines demanded by FEC, and not to contest this legally. Therefore, IMHO, we cannot reasonably retain the paragraph exactly as it is.

I see in your earlier discussion that you both think that one should avoid unnecessary duplications in the article (and in general). I concur. However, this leaves me with a problem. It would be simple to enlarge the offending paragraph with a notice that indeed the FEC has found probable cause for the HRC campaign and the DNC to have wrongly booked payments for an in itself perfectly legal investigation; but this more or less should duplicate the text about this in the section Steele dossier. Another possibility would be to remove just both occurrences of the word "declared" from the paragraph; but it then probably would not quite be in accordance with the given source (Bump). Do you have any suggestions for resolving this?

One possibility I thought of is to insert an anchor at the earlier paragraph treating FEC's findings and the fines, and then change the paragraph to something like the following:
 * By contrast, Steele's work was a legal, campaign expense and did not involve any voluntary offer of aid to the Clinton campaign from the Russian government. FEC law allows such campaign expenditures, even if the aid is performed by foreigners, if they are properly declared (which however may not have been the case here; see [the anchor]).

What do you think? JoergenB (talk) 23:26, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I really like your thinking! That's a good catch. When that was written, there was no March 2022 FEC decision on the matter, and when it happened, it was added to a different section. I have now moved it to the right place, so now we have this:


 * I think your wording is closer to what we should have, so, taking into account our current wording, would you please take another shot at it? Feel free to rework it into something that includes your finding. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 01:30, 5 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Moving the FEC fine sentence to the  Legal status and comparison to Trump Tower meeting was a rather good and appropriate idea, I think.
 * If you wish, I'll try to tweak this a little. The text will become a little bit longer, since I'll add a few sentences about the original complaint and the extent to which is was denied or sustained.  This may be adequate.  (Actually, the Trump side has not just compared hiring an investigator of foreign nationality with receiving aid from a foreign government.  Some months ago, the monetary punishment of the Clinton campaign without any accompanying NY criminal process against Clinton was cited as an example of why the Prosecution of Donald Trump in New York should be dismissed as 'selective prosecution'; also see Talk:Prosecution of Donald Trump in New York, if you wish.  This was how I found out about the Steele dossier case; and is a reason I think we should be at least as careful as usual.)
 * I do trust you'll check my contribution, re-tweak it as you find needed, or even just revert it and instead adding your own tweaks, as you see fit. JoergenB (talk) 17:59, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Go for it. I have enough experience here to know that I am not always the best formulator of content. That's why the collaborative nature of this project is so important. We can all help to refine and improve content. It doesn't have to be absolutely perfect from the start. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 18:32, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

Jörgen, tusind tak for dine forbedringer til artiklen. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 00:06, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Ingen orsak. JoergenB (talk) 14:29, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

I believe the source is unreliable and should not be used at all. I was able to see an archived copy of it, Philip Bump's Why the Trump Tower meeting may have violated the law — and the Steele dossier likely didn’t as of August 2018. Some of the article's false or misleading statements: Natalia Veselnitskaya has "connections to the Russian government" (she was once employed in the Moscow prosecutor's office and knows Yuri Chaika if that's what this vagueness means), that she "apparently proceeded to outline how a businessman facing questionable criminal charges in Russia allegedly made donations to Hillary Clinton’s campaign" (what we actually know is that her focus was the Magnitsky Act though she may have known about a company that donated to the DNC), "Steele’s research involved talking to Russian government officials" (in fact major sources were people like Danchenko i.e. not even in Russia), "members of the Trump team might face legal consequences" (it's six years later and they didn't), the so-called offer from Ms Veselnitskaya was "part of Russia and its government’s support for Mr. Trump" (which leaves out that those words are not from her but from non-Russian Rob Goldstone who later said he had no idea what he was talking about), and of course the main menu item "There is no reason to think that Clinton’s campaign is culpable for any illegal act related to the employment of Steele" (yet the FEC fined her and the DNC due to probable cause to believe there was misreporting). It's no wonder to me that Jonathan Turley, who is a real lawyer, included this article in a selection of Mr Bump's errors. Peter Gulutzan (talk) 00:57, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Jonathan Turley
 * Really? I've learned to stay away from Jonathan Turley as a source, as he has a tendency to lean into pro-Trump conspiracy theories, even the conspiracy theory (totally debunked) that there was vote switching that favored Biden over Trump. He's a "Russiagate" truther and favorite of Fox News and unreliable sources. When unreliable sources like Fox News and Daily Wire like someone, you KNOW they are not on the level. Red flags.
 * The Washington Post is a RS, and, like all sources, we use it on a case-by-case basis. Does the way it's used here create some problem? I suspect that your argument is with many RS we use in our articles about the dossier, Trump Tower meeting, Russian interference, etc. Using Turley as a source for these issues is a red flag. Just be careful. If he contradicts what we say in our articles here, then don't believe him. Our RS are more reliable than he is on these topics.
 * Natalia Veselnitskaya has "connections to the Russian government"
 * Yes, she has lots of connections with the Russian government. They wouldn't send just anybody to bring the official offer of help to the Trump campaign. Goldstone even confirmed that Natalia Veselnitskaya was a "Russian government attorney". You don't seriously believe his attempt to minimize his role, do you? Read more about him here.
 * "Steele’s research involved talking to Russian government officials" (in fact major sources were people like Danchenko i.e. not even in Russia)
 * Danchenko, Galkina, and Dolan all had contacts in the Kremlin, and Steele had other contacts besides them. Danchenko did visit Russia as part of his research. He is unusually well-connected in Russia, and the FBI heaped high praise on him as a confidential human source.
 * "members of the Trump team might face legal consequences" (it's six years later and they didn't)
 * "Trump team"....how many were convicted and then pardoned by Trump? How many had proven secretive contacts with Russia and WikiLeaks, but were not tried? Trump pardoned five people convicted as a result of investigations into Russian interference in the 2016 presidential elections: Michael Flynn, George Papadopoulos, Alex van der Zwaan, Roger Stone, whose 40-month sentence for lying to Congress, witness tampering, and obstruction he had already commuted in July, and Paul Manafort.
 * the so-called offer from Ms Veselnitskaya was "part of Russia and its government’s support for Mr. Trump" (which leaves out that those words are not from her but from non-Russian Rob Goldstone who later said he had no idea what he was talking about)
 * Goldstone wrote to Trump Jr.:
 * "The Crown prosecutor of Russia met with [Emin's] father Aras this morning and in their meeting offered to provide the Trump campaign with some official documents and information that would incriminate Hillary and her dealings with Russia and would be very useful to your father.
 * This is obviously very high level and sensitive information but is part of Russia and its government's support for Mr. Trump - helped along by Aras and Emin.
 * The "Crown Prosecutor", Chaika, is known as the king of kompromat. Trump's mere association with Agalarov and Goldstone (already from 2013) made him susceptible to kompromat and blackmail, due to the system of sistema under which the Russians operate.
 * This source will really bring you up to speed on all things related to Trump collusion with Russia.
 * Rob Goldstone may be a resident of Russia, or at least spend a lot of time there. I don't recall if he's considered a Russian agent or asset, but he's certainly a useful idiot for them. He is Emin's publicist. He is allied (that usually means compromised) with Russian oligarchs, primarily Aras Agalarov, whose Crocus Group allegedly controlled the pee tape. He was with Trump on several occasions when kompromat was allegedly collected on Trump, sometimes where Goldstone was involved in the planning of Trump's activities. He was a prime mover, together with Emin Agalarov, of the Trump Tower meeting, itself an occasion that provided kompromat on Donald Trump (because he lied about the meeting) and those who were there. On 7 June 2016, on behalf of Emin Agalarov, Goldstone e-mailed Donald Trump's son Donald Trump Jr., to request a meeting between the younger Trump and Russian lawyer Natalia Veselnitskaya (referred to in Goldstone's e-mail as a "Russian government attorney"). According to Goldstone's email, Agalarov wanted to "provide the Trump campaign with some official documents and information" that would help Donald Trump's campaign and damage the campaign of his rival, Hillary Clinton.  Donald Trump, Jr., replied immediately:  "If it's what you say[,] I love it[,] especially later in the summer."
 * and of course the main menu item "There is no reason to think that Clinton’s campaign is culpable for any illegal act related to the employment of Steele" (yet the FEC fined her and the DNC due to probable cause to believe there was misreporting)
 * "Misreporting"? How? Unlike the eager acceptance of the Russian offer of help to Trump's campaign, the act of employing Steele was not illegal. The problem was with the expense declaration, and they were fined for that. Case closed. We cover this in this article.
 * Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 03:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Jonathan Turley, who is a real lawyer
 * yes, he has a law license. tenure, too. and he's on Fox News primetime a lot. soibangla (talk) 04:06, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Is Fox News a RS for American politics and science. NO.
 * Do mainstream, sensible, people usually appear on that unreliable source? NO.
 * Has Turley pushed pro-Trump, pro-Russian, conspiracy theories? YES.
 * Turley strikes out. Using a bit of common sense really helps. This has to do with loyalty to our WP:RS policy and applying it to the real world of possible sources. It has to do with the ability to vet sources for reliability. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 04:29, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * "the FBI heaped high praise on him as a confidential human source." Can the FBI be trusted for information relating to American politics? Dimadick (talk) 07:50, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * LOL! Good one. Of course, they have their axes to grind, but that doesn't mean nothing they say is worthwhile. Russian intelligence certainly isn't trustworthy for American politics, yet Trump/GOP/MAGA/Turley trusts them and repeats their lies. In this type of case, yes, the FBI is certainly more trustworthy than Turley. It's still a fact that the FBI did praise Danchenko. (See Igor Danchenko.) Danchenko's value as a source for Steele should not be underestimated, and he was far from the only well-connected source used by Steele. There is even the court case against Danchenko where Judge Trenga kept swatting down Durham's dubious claims and acknowledged that Steele had other sources for the dossier than Danchenko. Trenga countered Durham's contention "that Danchenko was Steele's primary source of information for the Steele Reports writ large" by noting that Steele might have used other sources even more than Danchenko: "Nor is there any evidence that... Steele only, or almost entirely, used Danchenko as his source for the Reports." Durham's case was so faulty that Trenga acquitted Danchenko.
 * Durham had insinuated that Dolan was the source for the salacious claims in the dossier, but Durham had no solid evidence for that insinuation. Yet, Dolan was the source for the claims about Manafort in the dossier, and they were true. Danchenko's sources were the ones who told him about the old pee tape rumor, an old rumor that was "common knowledge around the Kremlin". The rumor started right after the 2013 Miss Universe contest, and Trump and Cohen have always known about it, yet Trump lies that it was a rumor created by Steele. That's nonsense, and Cohen testified as much. Ever since then he has been trying to locate the tapes and hush that rumor.
 * In my myriad Google Alerts, I just got more about Turley's association with unreliable sources, this time The Daily Caller. Anyone who is favorably associated with unreliable sources so much is a dubious source. It's just one more red flag. All these right-wing sources (many used to be center-right, but after Trump and MAGA they have gone whole hog off the deep end into pushing lies and conspiracy theories) are good indicators for who is reliable and who isn't. I keep an eye on those sources and recognize when editors are getting their (mis-/dis-)information from such sources. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 13:22, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

My post was a response in the previous thread, Valjean split it off and added a "WaPo ..." heading. In case that confused anyone: it's about the use of Mr Bump's article in the section "Legal status and comparison to Trump Tower meeting". Peter Gulutzan (talk) 17:56, 10 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Oh crap! Sorry about that. I have removed that heading. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 18:52, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

BTW, I think we have strayed into NOTFORUM territory, and I'm certainly guilty in that regard. This is not the place to carry on a meta-discussion about Turley, Russian interference, and many other related matters. We need to stick to the point of the "Legal status and comparison to Trump Tower meeting" section, so I'll try to do better.

Bump is not the only RS who accurately makes the point that the DNC/Clinton oppo research was legal, including the hiring of Steele, something the leaders of the Clinton campaign were not involved in and did not know about for some time. Also, other RS than Bump contrast the legal Steele/Fusion GPS oppo research with the illegal/unpatriotic and eager acceptance of many forms of Russian help by the Trump campaign. See: "The truth about Russia, Trump and the 2016 election", by Glenn Kessler.

Legitimate questions were raised by JoergenB when he started this thread, and I think he did an admirable job of fixing the problems. -- Valjean (talk) ( PING me ) 19:40, 10 May 2024 (UTC)