Talk:Stefan Bonneau/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:18, 7 November 2015 (UTC)

I'll finish this review soon JAG  UAR   21:18, 7 November 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "Bonneau came off the bench" - what does this mean? He started playing in the active team?
 * It means that he wasn't a starter in the team and he was getting his playing time as a substitute.


 * "As a junior he broke his wrist in a training" - in training


 * "to help his team get past Stjarnan 92–86" - 'get past' is a tad informal
 * Get past is changed to win.


 * "On April 17, he scored 52 points" - what year?
 * Changed to On 17 April 2015 he scored 52 points

On hold
This is a decent and solid article with few prose problems. However, there are numerous dead links which stops this from meeting the GA criteria in the current state. Once all of them are dealt with/archived, then this should be good to go. Nice work on this article! JAG UAR   18:38, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * : The issues stated above are fixed. Hansi667 (Neighbor Of The Beast) a penny for your thoughts? 20:46, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing all of the issues! It seems that this meets the GA criteria now, so I'll be promoting this. Well done.  JAG  UAR   21:43, 8 November 2015 (UTC)