Talk:Stefan Vladislav/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 3family6 (talk · contribs) 19:54, 22 January 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * No copyvios detected.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Much of the prose needs to be improved, both for phrasing and for punctuation use.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "and Khan Bata (the grandson of Genghis Khan)" - link to Batu Khan, and perhaps call him Batu in this article, since that's what the Wikipedia article on him calls him.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed Khan Bata→Batu Khan.--Z oupan 18:28, 3 February 2015 (UTC)


 * The following sentences are stand-alone, and thus should be merged into a paragraph: "Jireček thought that Vladislav lived in Skadar.[10]" and "Vladislav died in ca. 1269 and was buried in Mileševa." The first sentence is also fragmentary, and should be expanded.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * In Accession, one sentence says "some of his nobility revolted in fall 1233." - Because many readers may be in the southern hemisphere, where seasons are the opposite of those in the north, a term such as "late 1233" might be a better word choice. If a month range is given in sources, perhaps use that.-- 3family6  ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * The "Personality" section has only one sentence, so the section should be deleted and the content moved into another section.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * Has a well-formatted reference section.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * B. Citations to reliable sources, where necessary:
 * "There is a hypothesis that Radoslav even received a part of Serbian land to administrate." - this needs a citation
 * Whole paragraph cited by Fajfric.--Z oupan 18:34, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
 * That's fine. I just wanted to confirm that it was supported by a source.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 19:11, 3 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "Note that, as Vladislav ruled from 1233 to 1243 and died after 1264, the flag predates the time of the description." - this should have a citation as well.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Removed unnecessary (obvious) observation.--Z oupan 18:31, 3 February 2015 (UTC)


 * C. No original research:
 * All content is verifiable.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Major aspects are addressed, stays broad in scope.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * Stays focused on the subject, no extraneous detail.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Fair, neutral presentation.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * No disruptive editing since this article was created.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Images are properly licensed, though I had to fill out some missing parameters for several.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * Relevant, with suitable captions.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall: Needs some work on the prose.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Done.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 19:11, 3 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Pass or Fail:
 * All issues resolved, passed.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 19:11, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I will continue to have the article improved!--Z oupan 20:38, 3 February 2015 (UTC)