Talk:Stefi Baum

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Egourdji, Dvenettam, Gracesnowdon. Peer reviewers: Slrichard, Reithger.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback for WGST 3991 article proposal
Stefi Baum is a good choice for this assignment.

Baum's CV and her profiles at various institutions are a solid start. Most of these will probably go under an External Links section in your final article. You can use facts in these profiles to find additional sources. Major awards must be confirmed. For example, the American Association for the Advancement of Science (AAAS) lists their elected fellows in the journal Science. Most of her profiles mention that she is active in STEM outreach. Searching for her name and outreach helped me find a source about an outreach award.

Peer Edit/Review - WGST3991
Praise: Lots of great information and impressive that a usable picture was found. The awards section leaps out at the reader - this was the first thing we noticed, very nice!

Critiques: The opening blurb has redundant information that can be moved to the info box. In the "Early Life" section, more information can be added between her birth and high school info and is present within reference #4 in your reference section. In the "Career" section, the order of events are in reverse order present to past; consider changing it to the start of their career onward to adhere to typical format on Wikipedia. Lack of clarity in certain areas when referring to job titles, and repetition of using the 'From [date] to [date]' format to describe events in their life. (Difficult to understand what you meant in some places in the "Career" section).

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Slrichard (talk • contribs) 17:18, 1 March 2018 (UTC)