Talk:Stella F. Simon

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Peer Review
Hi! I copyedited parts of your article to try and fix some grammar etc. That being said, I think you did a good job in giving a brief synopsis of Stella F. Simon. However, it would be great if you provided some more information on her. I suggest that you maybe find more on her career (for the career section) e.g. how she decided to make the one film, why she only made one film, how did she go about making the film etc. (that is, if you can find such info on her). Also, in the Early Life and Education section, I think you should cite some of the statements you made i.e. not only cite the whole paragraph once, because it makes it seem like you didn't get the information from a source. You can maybe elaborate some more on the Early Life section too, especially because the article as a whole doesn't look like it made word count, and I don't want you to be marked down because of it. Overall, good start, remember your grammar, and I hope I helped. CCYeeBo (talk) 02:09, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

Question About Finding a Source
Hello! I am wondering if anyone knows of any way to access the original article written about Stella Simon for Abel's Photographic Weekly-- I have seen it referenced in several scholarly articles about Simon but I have not been able to find the article itself (I can only find different volumes of the magazine online), and I think that it would be useful to have direct quotes about Simon from the time of her career. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Donewithbirds (talk • contribs) 15:34, 1 March 2019 (UTC)