Talk:Step Back in Time/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 13:50, 10 September 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing your article.

Infobox
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 * be aware of the redirects "Stock, Aitken and Waterman". → Stock, Aitken and Waterman
 * Shouldn't also have the "pop" genre?

Lead

 * However, it was certified → However, it was only certified
 * "nd has been noted by music critics as one of her most popular tracks". → it should be in the paragraph above, not this one.


 * Rhythm of Love Tour, On a Night Like This, Showgirl: The Homecoming Tour → year of the tours between parenthesis.
 * appearance in the 2013 film The World's End. → appearance in the British comic science fiction film The World's End.

Background and composition

 * Same as the first point in the infobox.
 * "Step Back in Time" was composed by Stock, Aitken and Waterman → again?
 * Water → who? You meant Waterman

Release and reception
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 * "The standard 12" vinyl was released worldwide, and featured the original recording, instrumental version and the Walkin' Rhythm mix; in the UK, the original recording was omitted. It was re-released as a 7" vinyl worldwide, and included the original recording and instrumental version. In November 1990, a CD single was issued by PWL Records in Japan and included the three tracks from the Australian vinyl; it was distributed worldwide that same month with the same track list. In France, a special mini CD included the original recording and instrumental version, whilst the same track list appeared on a cassette tape in Australia." → I'm having trouble following this section, needs some serious re-writing.
 * "parent album" → You should replace it by the name of the album because you don't mention it in this section.

Commercial performance

 * "In New Zealand, it entered at number 36 on the New Zealand Singles Chart". → redundant; ""In New Zealand, it entered at number 36 on the singles chart"

Music video

 * "as she believed was the era that celebrated disco music" → as she believed that was the era that celebrated disco music.
 * he wrote → remove "he"
 * Use a synonym of "scene", set for example instead of always saying "scene"
 * remove "he believed"

Live performances

 * On her 2005 Showgirl: The Greatest Hits Tour in London, United Kingdom, a sample of the track was performed during her the performance of her 2000 single "Spinning Around" → On her 2005 Showgirl: The Greatest Hits Tour in London, United Kingdom, a sample of the track was sung during the performance of her 2000 single "Spinning Around".
 * Use sing or any other word instead of performance so many times.
 * The same goes for tour, use show, circuit....

Other uses and appearances

 * I'm not sure about the usage of that table, can you show me other articles using such table? I would rather have that in prose, seems just to much.
 * ✅. Changed to columns instead; having paraphrased them or put them into sentences would be too long, and Wikipedia advised not to use more than five citations within one sentence.
 * It's better definitely, however not my cup of tea.

"Step Back in Time" has appeared on numerous greatest hits compilation albums conducted by Minogue, including Greatest Hits (1990) and Ultimate Kylie (2004). Alongside, the track has been remixed by different producers and musicians, and have been listed in remix albums by Minogue including Kylie's Remixes: Vol. 2 (1992) and twice on her Greatest Remix Hits 3 (1998). Issued by numerous labels such as PWL, Mushroom, and Warner Music Australia, the list below is a detailed format of the appearances of "Step Back in Time" on Minogue's official compilation albums. →

"Step Back in Time" has appeared on numerous greatest hits compilation albums, throughout the years, conducted by Minogue, including Greatest Hits (1990), Ultimate Kylie (2004) and K25 Time Capsule (2012). Alongside, the track has been remixed by different producers and musicians, and have been listed in remix and greatest hits albums by Minogue, with the Walkin' Rhythm mix included in Kylie's Remixes: Vol. 2 (1992) and two Greatest Remix Hits volumes; an extended version of the record presented on the Singles Collection (1990) and the fourth Greatest Remix Hits, the last of Minogue's series of remixes albums, issued in 1998 and the Harding/Curnow Remix, which appears on Greatest Remix Hits 3 (1998). They were issued by numerous labels such as PWL, Mushroom, and Warner Music Australia.
 * ✅ the adjustments to this section, but I left the list so I can find another alternative way. I probably will remove it, but just letting you know in advance.

Format and track listings

 * Use – (click to copy and edit)

Credits and personnel

 * Use – (click to copy and edit)
 * Link mixing, engineer and packaging design

Weekly charts

 * Switzerland is linking to some other song.

Year-end charts

 * Not on citation given the UK peak.

Certifications

 * Fine.

Overall GA review

 * Do not make any changes until I say so.
 * you can start addressing my comments. On hold for seven days. Good luck ping with any questions, suggestions or when you are finished. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:36, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
 * My apologizes for the late comment; I would have finished in a day or two, but have been so busy. In saying that, I have finished all the requirements . Thank you for the review. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 04:49, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I will give it a second look over the weekend, sorry for the inconvenience. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:00, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I have added some more issues on the second look at this article, please address them and ping me when you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:20, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Done all adjustments; I've let a comment at each of the new updates you said, but hopefully this helps