Talk:Stephen Lindsay

Article approved
Please consider adding more standard biographical details {date and place of birth}, when he became a professor, and further details on his fields of research, appropriately linked.

Review for Stephen Lindsay
I think it's a good start, but more information would be good (although it's possible this article is not finished yet). Some more information could be given about his research, such as when it is mentioned 'the factors and processes that may lead to changes' and 'errors and distortions in memory', I think What are these factors and processes?, and What are these errors and distortions?. More depth into eyewitness memory and his part into such research and other examples of his work could be given.
 * I would put the paragraphs in numerical order of year, so it flows in a better hierachy. For example at the moment it reads 1985, 1995, 2006 and back to 1991, which is quite stilted to read. I would suggest putting Early Career first, since these are the earliest dates given, and then re-order the first paragraph to come after Early Career.
 * There could be another section on his work and research, and what he specialises in. It might be better to take his work interests out of Early Career (except where it is relevant to speak of the origins of his interests) and write more on it.There are only four references so far, to expand on what is written about him a suggestion could be to include references for articles he has written or co-written so more of his work is included.
 * The article so far provides good biographical information on Stephen Lindsay, but it would be great to be able to read more about the type of work that he does, especially since the latter may be what someone who searches for him on Wikipedia may be specifically trying to find information on.
 * The spelling, grammar and links for what is written are good. Johunter (User talk:Johunter|talk]]) 14.44, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

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