Talk:Steve Gromek/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:36, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAG UAR   14:36, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "Gromek was the winning pitcher in game four of the 1948 World Series with the Cleveland Indians" - this is a duplink
 * "New Cleveland manager Lou Boudreau used Gromek as a relief pitcher in 1942" - this needs un-linking, already been linked
 * "Gromek started the 1944 season in Cleveland's bullpen" - link bullpen for unfamiliar readers
 * "Doby had just broken the color barrier in the American League a season earlier" - how did he break the color barrier earlier? Is it documented?
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * NPOV
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

This article is excellently written and meets the criteria as it is. I can't see any reason to leave it on hold. JAG UAR   18:00, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! Links are fixed, as for the Doby point, it's documented on his article big time, I didn't go into detail on Gromek's article though so as not to get too tangential, but if you think I should explain it a bit better I can go ahead and do that. Wizardman  18:20, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that! The colour barrier issue should be fine. JAG  UAR   18:36, 28 November 2016 (UTC)