Talk:Sticky & Sweet Tour (album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Adabow  ( complain )  05:35, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

The article is very close to GA standard, with just the referencing of certifications stopping it from passing. I have also mentioned some minor prose problems, but if they are not fixed the article will still pass GA. I will allow seven days for improvements to be made.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Prose

 * Opening sentence (and rest of lead) changes tense: "...is the third live album...and was available on DVD...", pick one tense and stick with it.
 * Corrected. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * 'Background' section: "The show was broadcast on VH1 on April 2, 2010 for the last time, just a few days after the official release" – this is a bit unclear; what show?
 * Clarified. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "...promotional campaign for the release, giving an autographed DVD..." maybe giving away?
 * Good. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)


 * 'Critical reception' section: "Mikael Wood from Entertainment Weekly gave the video a B+ and commented, "[T]his live CD-DVD", per MOS:QUOTE, the 'T' in 'This' doesn't need to be enclosed in square brackets
 * Oh really? --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * 'Chart performance': the position of the charting of the Blu-Ray release should be included
 * I did add it, but User:Kww, who specializes in Billboard charts, removed it, saying that since its not an album chart, it shouldn't be mentioned in teh table. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I was referring to the prose section
 * New Zealand Album chart → New Zealand Albums Chart


 * ??? --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Leave it to me  Adabow  ( complain )  05:59, 15 July 2010 (UTC)


 * 'Track listing' section: maybe rename as plural (Track listings), given the several listings
 * Instead of breaking up the different listings with level three headers, why not include them as the  parameter in the  template? The multiple headers also clog up the ToC
 * I'm not exactly familiar with the jargon, can you show me one? I'll do the rest. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Sure