Talk:Still Breathing (Green Day song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:43, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

 * "January 15 – July 24, 2016" → source plus add to the article.
 * "Pop punk alternative rock" → should be in the body of the article

Lead

 * Very small lead.
 * who wrote and produced the song, release dates, add more detail regarding the official video (resume of plot, director of the video and so on), some background of the song.
 * Needs serious work this section.

Background and composition

 * "Armstrong wrote became "Bang Bang"," → Armstrong wrote was "Bang Bang",
 * "than "Bang Bang"" → than the lead single
 * Use

Release

 * was released as the second single from Revolution Radio on November 12, 2016 → where?
 * The source says "Still Breathing" debuts on the Nov. 12 Mainstream Rock Songs" → release and debut are two very different things.
 * Discogs is not a reliable source. But I get that you intended the back cover use "CiteAV Media" to quote that stuff or use a side note.
 * Remove the Billie Joe Armstrong picture, its not from the video or anything like that.

Music video

 * This shouldn't be under the release section.
 * and feel content → use something else this sounds awful.
 * Sources should be in an ascent order. Example: 8, 12, 18

Reception

 * If you could add more two or three reviews wouldn't be a bad idea at all.
 * Link Music Critics to music journalism.

Chart performance

 * "The song also charted in Belgium (Ultratip Flanders), Czech Republic (Rádio Top 100 Oficiální), and Slovakia (Rádio Top 100 Oficiální)." → add the respective peaks.
 * Use.

Track listing

 * Missing sources.
 * "All lyrics written by Billie Joe Armstrong;" → not according to the infobox

Charts

 * Fine

Overall GA review
are you up for this? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:45, 10 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Why there isn't a release history section with the process on top of it?
 * Missing a personnel section with credits.
 * No Live performances?
 * This article needs some serious work and after addressing all these issues I will give it another review. It seems a bit rushed from your part. On hold for seven days for the first batch of changes. Good luck, anything ping me. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:42, 4 July 2017 (UTC)