Talk:Stjepan Vukčić Kosača/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:30, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * In the infobox, use "plainlist" instead of.
 * herzog should be capitalized.
 * "reconciliation achieved" "reconciliation was achieved"
 * Add a hyphen between "present day".
 * "he will rise to become" - you mean "he rose", right?
 * "like non other Bosnian nobleman of his time did" - see WP:NEUTRAL
 * "these circumstance" - singular or plural?
 * Avoid using words like "just", "yet", and "like".
 * "two crucial Bosnian nobleman" "two crucial Bosnian noblemen"
 * "achieve a peace" "achieve peace"
 * "undertking" - typo?
 * Avoid starting sentences with "but" and "and".
 * "minfd too" - typo?
 * Be consistent with knyaz, Knyaz, and Knyaz.
 * "he invited Ottomans" "he invited the Ottomans"
 * #Citizenship_of_Dubrovnik is unsourced.
 * "29 June"  "29 June"
 * Remove the comma after "the two men".
 * Add a comma after Duke Sladoje Semković.
 * "the Venetians ." "the Venetians."
 * Remove the comma after "King Thomas took back Srebrenica".
 * "300 ducats was" "300 ducats were"
 * "iobliged" - typo?
 * Remove all line-breaks created using.
 * "de nova dignitate cherzech acquisita" - explain what that means.
 * "Tvrtko in"  "Tvrtko in"
 * Be consistent with herceg, Herceg, and Herceg.
 * "Just before death" "Before the death"
 * "After this he completely withdraw to his fortress in Novi." - reword
 * "of Kosača family" "of the Kosača family"
 * "but Skanderbeg failed to carry out his promises" - source?
 * "most Bosnian nobleman" "most Bosnian noblemen"
 * "a move which proved to be" "a move that proved to be"
 * "traditionally, most Bosnians' attitudes, and Stjepan Vukčić was no exception" - reword
 * Be consistent with the use and absence of serial commas.

Overall, this article needs a large copyedit. Try paraphrasing quotes and removing the article's informal tone. Failing for now, but feel free to renominate when my comments above have been addressed and a copy-edit has been requested and completed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:32, 21 July 2021 (UTC)